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Common Literary Errors in Advanced Writing

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TL;DR 🦄
  • 🧭 Advanced writing errors are usually style-control errors, not “you forgot one magic grammar rule” errors.
  • 📚 Keep 문어체 [mu-neo-che] = written style, 구어체 [gu-eo-che] = spoken style, and 해라체 [hae-ra-che] = plain formal written ending clearly separated.
  • 🛠️ Fix common mistakes by checking ending consistency, particle choice, spacing, source of evidence, and word-level naturalness before calling a sentence “finished.”
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🌈 The Big Picture

Advanced Korean writing is less about “Can I make a sentence?” and more about “Can I make the sentence sound like it belongs in the same essay?” 🧩
This lesson focuses on 오류 수정 [o-ryu su-jeong] = error correction. The main danger is mixing registers: a formal essay suddenly becomes chatty, a report uses a spoken ending, or a literary-style sentence gets glued to a casual phrase like mismatched socks. 🧦
The goal is not to make every sentence fancy. The goal is to make every sentence controlled, consistent, and appropriate for advanced writing. Think editor’s desk, not text-message lightning storm. 📰

🎨 The Core Error-Correction Family

Use these key labels to diagnose advanced writing mistakes:
  • 문어체 [mu-neo-che] = written style. Use this for essays, reports, explanations, articles, formal summaries, and academic-style writing. 📚
  • 구어체 [gu-eo-che] = spoken style. Natural in conversation, but often too casual for formal writing. 💬
  • 해라체 [hae-ra-che] = plain formal written style. Common in explanatory writing, articles, reports, and neutral essay sentences. 📰
  • 하십시오체 [ha-sip-si-o-che] = highly polite formal style. Useful for speeches, announcements, instructions, and respectful official writing. 🏛️
  • 일관성 [il-gwan-seong] = consistency. This means keeping the same style, tone, and logic throughout a paragraph. 🧵
  • 맞춤법 [mat-chum-ppeop] = spelling/orthography. This includes correct written forms. ✏️
  • 띄어쓰기 [ttui-eo-sseu-gi] = spacing. In Korean, spacing can change readability and sometimes meaning. 🧱
  • 조사 [jo-sa] = particle/case marker. Particles like 은/는 [eun/neun], 이/가 [i/ga], 을/를 [eul/reul], 에 [e], and 에서 [e-seo] show sentence relationships. 🏷️
  • 어색하다 [eo-sae-ka-da] = to be awkward/unnatural, and 자연스럽다 [ja-yeon-seu-reop-da] = to be natural. 🌿
  • 근거 [geun-geo] = evidence/reasoning, 주장 [ju-jang] = claim/argument, and 결론 [gyeol-lon] = conclusion. These keep advanced writing logical. 🧠

🛠️ How They Work in a Sentence

  • 이 글은 문어체로 써야 한다. [i geu-reun mu-neo-che-ro sseo-ya han-da] — This text should be written in written style. 📝
      • 글 [geul] = text/writing, 문어체로 [mu-neo-che-ro] = in written style, 써야 한다 [sseo-ya han-da] = should be written.
  • 문장 끝의 표현을 일관되게 맞춘다. [mun-jang kkeu-te pyo-hyeo-neul il-gwan-doe-ge mat-chun-da] — Match the expressions at the ends of sentences consistently. 🧵
      • 문장 끝 [mun-jang kkeut] = sentence ending, 표현 [pyo-hyeon] = expression, 일관되게 [il-gwan-doe-ge] = consistently.
  • 근거가 부족하면 주장이 약해진다. [geun-geo-ga bu-jo-ka-myeon ju-jang-i ya-kae-jin-da] — If the evidence is insufficient, the argument becomes weak. 🧠
      • 근거 [geun-geo] = evidence, 부족하다 [bu-jo-ka-da] = to be insufficient, 약해지다 [ya-kae-ji-da] = to become weak.

🧩 General Formation Rule

When correcting advanced writing, use a five-step editing loop:
  1. Style check: Is the sentence 문어체 [mu-neo-che] = written style, or did 구어체 [gu-eo-che] = spoken style sneak in? 🕵️
  1. Ending check: Are endings consistent, such as -다 [-da] plain written endings across an explanatory paragraph? 🧾
  1. Particle check: Do 은/는 [eun/neun], 이/가 [i/ga], 을/를 [eul/reul], 에 [e], and 에서 [e-seo] match the sentence roles? 🏷️
  1. Spacing and spelling check: Review 띄어쓰기 [ttui-eo-sseu-gi] = spacing and 맞춤법 [mat-chum-ppeop] = spelling/orthography. ✏️
  1. Logic check: Does each 주장 [ju-jang] = claim have enough 근거 [geun-geo] = evidence before the 결론 [gyeol-lon] = conclusion? 🧠

📚 Cross-check note

The style labels 문어체, 구어체, 해라체, 하십시오체, spacing/spelling guidance, and standard-language terms were checked against 국립국어원 / korean.go.kr. ✅

🪞 Synonym Alert

  • 오류 [o-ryu] — error; formal and common in writing, analysis, systems, and correction contexts. ⚠️
  • 실수 [sil-su] — mistake; everyday and human-sounding. Use it for accidental mistakes, not always formal textual errors. 🙈
  • 수정하다 [su-jeong-ha-da] — to revise/correct; neutral and useful for writing. 🛠️
  • 고치다 [go-chi-da] — to fix; more everyday, still useful, but less formal than 수정하다. 🔧
  • 어색하다 [eo-sae-ka-da] — awkward/unnatural; useful when grammar is technically possible but the style feels wrong. 🧦
  • 부자연스럽다 [bu-ja-yeon-seu-reop-da] — unnatural; more explicit than 어색하다. 🌿

⚠️ Pitfalls to Dodge

  • ❌ 이 글은 중요해요. [i geu-reun jung-yo-hae-yo] → ✅ 이 글은 중요하다. [i geu-reun jung-yo-ha-da] (For neutral advanced writing, avoid casual polite spoken style.)
  • ❌ 근거가 부족해요, 그래서 주장이 약하다. [geun-geo-ga bu-jo-kae-yo, geu-rae-seo ju-jang-i ya-ka-da] → ✅ 근거가 부족하므로 주장이 약하다. [geun-geo-ga bu-jo-ka-meu-ro ju-jang-i ya-ka-da] (Do not mix spoken -해요 with written -다.)
  • ❌ 문장 끝 표현이 다르다 그래서 어색하다. [mun-jang kkeut pyo-hyeo-ni da-reu-da geu-rae-seo eo-sae-ka-da] → ✅ 문장 끝 표현이 달라서 어색하다. [mun-jang kkeut pyo-hyeo-ni dal-la-seo eo-sae-ka-da] (Connect the reason smoothly.)
  • ❌ 조사를 확인 한다. [jo-sa-reul hwa-gin han-da] → ✅ 조사를 확인한다. [jo-sa-reul hwa-gin-han-da] (Spacing: the verb 확인하다 is written together.)
  • ❌ 근거 없이 결론을 쓴다. [geun-geo eop-si gyeol-lo-neul sseun-da] → ✅ 근거를 제시한 뒤 결론을 쓴다. [geun-geo-reul je-si-han dwi gyeol-lo-neul sseun-da] (Advanced writing needs evidence before conclusion.)
🖋️ Bottom line: advanced writing correction is a tidy little editor robot. It checks style, endings, particles, spacing, spelling, and logic — then politely throws awkward sentences into the repair shop. 🤖
 
Try this exercise
Instructions: Choose the better correction for each sentence. Focus on written style, consistent endings, spacing, particles, and logic. Say the corrected sentence aloud, then open the Answer toggle.
1. 이 글은 중요＿＿＿＿.
[i geu-reun jung-yo＿＿＿＿]
This writing is important. 📝
Answer
하다 — 중요하다 keeps the sentence in neutral written style; 중요해요 sounds spoken.
2. 문장 끝 표현을 일관되게 ＿＿＿＿.
[mun-jang kkeut pyo-hyeo-neul il-gwan-doe-ge ＿＿＿＿]
Match the sentence-ending expressions consistently. 🧵
Answer
맞춘다 — 맞추다 = to match/adjust; 맞춘다 fits written instruction style.
3. 근거가 부족하면 주장이 ＿＿＿＿.
[geun-geo-ga bu-jo-ka-myeon ju-jang-i ＿＿＿＿]
If evidence is insufficient, the argument becomes weak. 🧠
Answer
약해진다 — 약해지다 = to become weak. It naturally describes the argument.
4. 조사를 확인＿＿＿＿.
[jo-sa-reul hwa-gin＿＿＿＿]
Check the particles. 🏷️
Answer
한다 — Write 확인한다 together because 확인하다 is one verb.
5. 띄어쓰기를 ＿＿＿＿.
[ttui-eo-sseu-gi-reul ＿＿＿＿]
Review the spacing. 🧱
Answer
검토한다 — 검토하다 = to review; the written ending -다 keeps the tone formal.
6. 문어체와 구어체를 ＿＿＿＿ 않는다.
[mu-neo-che-wa gu-eo-che-reul ＿＿＿＿ an-neun-da]
Do not mix written style and spoken style. 💬
Answer
섞지 — 섞다 = to mix; 섞지 않는다 = do not mix.
7. 주장을 쓰기 전에 근거를 ＿＿＿＿.
[ju-jang-eul sseu-gi jeo-ne geun-geo-reul ＿＿＿＿]
Present evidence before writing the claim. 📌
Answer
제시한다 — 제시하다 = to present; formal and natural for evidence.
8. 어색한 표현을 ＿＿＿＿.
[eo-sae-kan pyo-hyeo-neul ＿＿＿＿]
Revise the awkward expression. 🧦
Answer
수정한다 — 수정하다 = to revise/correct; more formal than 고치다.
9. 결론은 근거 뒤에 ＿＿＿＿.
[gyeol-lo-neun geun-geo dwi-e ＿＿＿＿]
Write the conclusion after the evidence. 🧾
Answer
쓴다 — 쓰다 = to write; 쓴다 fits plain written style.
10. 맞춤법 오류를 ＿＿＿＿.
[mat-chum-ppeop o-ryu-reul ＿＿＿＿]
Correct the spelling errors. ✏️
Answer
수정한다 — 오류를 수정하다 = to correct errors; this is the core lesson phrase.
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Vocabulary Box
  • 글 → writing/text
  • 중요하다 → to be important
  • 문장 끝 → sentence ending
  • 표현 → expression
  • 일관되게 → consistently
  • 맞추다 → to match/adjust
  • 근거 → evidence
  • 부족하다 → to be insufficient
  • 주장 → claim/argument
  • 약해지다 → to become weak
  • 조사 → particle
  • 확인하다 → to check/confirm
  • 띄어쓰기 → spacing
  • 검토하다 → to review
  • 문어체 → written style
  • 구어체 → spoken style
  • 섞다 → to mix
  • 제시하다 → to present
  • 어색하다 → to be awkward
  • 수정하다 → to revise/correct
  • 결론 → conclusion
  • 쓰다 → to write
  • 맞춤법 → spelling/orthography
  • 오류 → error
Tip 💡 First ask “Does this sound like written Korean?” Then check particles, spacing, and logic.
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🎯 Practice Hub — Common Literary Errors in Advanced Writing
 
Welcome to the advanced-writing repair shop. 🛠️ You’ll practice spotting spoken-style intruders, fixing inconsistent endings, checking particles and spacing, and strengthening logic with evidence before conclusion. By the end, your paragraphs should sound less “group chat with footnotes” and more “controlled essay with a steady spine.” 🧠
 
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📝 Instructions: Complete or correct each prompt, read the finished sentence aloud, then check the Answer toggle. Pay attention to the writing style first, then the grammar details.
 

Exercise 1 — Written Style vs. Spoken Style 🧭

A. 이 글은 중요＿＿＿＿.
[i geu-reun jung-yo＿＿＿＿]
This writing is important. 📝
Answer
하다 — Written style prefers 중요하다, not spoken-style 중요해요.
B. 이 표현은 어색＿＿＿＿.
[i pyo-hyeo-neun eo-sae＿＿＿＿]
This expression is awkward. 🧦
Answer
하다 — 어색하다 fits neutral written style.
C. 이 문장은 자연스럽＿＿＿＿.
[i mun-jang-eun ja-yeon-seu-reop＿＿＿＿]
This sentence is natural. 🌿
Answer
다 — 자연스럽다 is the plain written form.
D. 구어체 표현을 피＿＿＿＿.
[gu-eo-che pyo-hyeo-neul pi＿＿＿＿]
Avoid spoken-style expressions. 💬
Answer
한다 — 피하다 = to avoid; 피한다 fits written guidance.
E. 문어체 표현을 사용＿＿＿＿.
[mu-neo-che pyo-hyeo-neul sa-yong＿＿＿＿]
Use written-style expressions. 📚
Answer
한다 — 사용하다 = to use; write 사용한다.
F. 글의 톤을 유지＿＿＿＿.
[geu-re to-neul yu-ji＿＿＿＿]
Maintain the tone of the writing. 🧵
Answer
한다 — 유지하다 = to maintain; a natural editing instruction.
G. 문장 끝을 확인＿＿＿＿.
[mun-jang kkeu-teul hwa-gin＿＿＿＿]
Check the sentence endings. 🔎
Answer
한다 — 확인하다 is written together: 확인한다.
H. 해라체는 설명문에 자주 쓰＿＿＿＿.
[hae-ra-che-neun seol-myeong-mu-ne ja-ju sseu＿＿＿＿]
Haera-che is often used in explanatory writing. 📰
Answer
인다 — 쓰이다 = to be used; 쓰인다 is natural written style.
I. 하십시오체는 안내문에 어울＿＿＿＿.
[ha-sip-si-o-che-neun an-nae-mu-ne eo-ul＿＿＿＿]
Hasipsio-che suits 안내문. 🏛️
Answer
린다 — 어울리다 = to suit; 어울린다 keeps the written ending.
J. 오류를 수정＿＿＿＿.
[o-ryu-reul su-jeong＿＿＿＿]
Correct the error. ⚠️
Answer
한다 — 수정하다 = to revise/correct; 수정한다 is the written form.
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Vocabulary Box
  • 글 → writing/text
  • 중요하다 → to be important
  • 표현 → expression
  • 어색하다 → to be awkward
  • 문장 → sentence
  • 자연스럽다 → to be natural
  • 구어체 → spoken style
  • 피하다 → to avoid
  • 문어체 → written style
  • 사용하다 → to use
  • 톤 → tone
  • 유지하다 → to maintain
  • 문장 끝 → sentence ending
  • 확인하다 → to check
  • 해라체 → plain formal written style
  • 설명문 → explanatory writing
  • 쓰이다 → to be used
  • 하십시오체 → highly polite formal style
  • 안내문 → notice/guide text
  • 어울리다 → to suit
  • 오류 → error
  • 수정하다 → to revise/correct
Tip 💡 Spoken endings like -해요 are not wrong everywhere, but they usually do not fit neutral advanced essays.
 

Exercise 2 — Ending Consistency + Style Control 🧵

A. 근거가 부족하므로 주장이 약＿＿＿＿.
[geun-geo-ga bu-jo-ka-meu-ro ju-jang-i ya＿＿＿＿]
Because evidence is insufficient, the argument is weak. 🧠
Answer
하다 — 약하다 keeps a plain written ending.
B. 근거를 제시한 뒤 결론을 ＿＿＿＿.
[geun-geo-reul je-si-han dwi gyeol-lo-neul ＿＿＿＿]
Write the conclusion after presenting evidence. 🧾
Answer
쓴다 — 쓰다 → 쓴다 in written style.
C. 주장과 근거를 연결＿＿＿＿.
[ju-jang-gwa geun-geo-reul yeon-gyeol＿＿＿＿]
Connect the claim and evidence. 🔗
Answer
한다 — 연결하다 = to connect; 연결한다.
D. 같은 글에서는 같은 톤을 유지＿＿＿＿.
[ga-teun geu-re-seo-neun ga-teun to-neul yu-ji＿＿＿＿]
In the same writing, maintain the same tone. 🧵
Answer
한다 — Consistency means one tone, not a parade of endings.
E. 문어체와 구어체가 섞이면 글이 어색＿＿＿＿.
[mu-neo-che-wa gu-eo-che-ga sseok-i-myeon geu-ri eo-sae＿＿＿＿]
If written and spoken styles mix, the writing becomes awkward. 🧦
Answer
해진다 — 어색해지다 = to become awkward.
F. 문장 끝 표현을 통일＿＿＿＿.
[mun-jang kkeut pyo-hyeo-neul tong-il＿＿＿＿]
Unify the sentence-ending expressions. 🧩
Answer
한다 — 통일하다 = to unify; 통일한다.
G. 설명문에서는 단정적인 표현을 사용＿＿＿＿.
[seol-myeong-mu-ne-seo-neun dan-jeong-jeo-gin pyo-hyeo-neul sa-yong＿＿＿＿]
In explanatory writing, use assertive expressions. 📰
Answer
한다 — 사용한다 matches the formal written tone.
H. 부자연스러운 문장은 수정＿＿＿＿.
[bu-ja-yeon-seu-reo-un mun-jang-eun su-jeong＿＿＿＿]
Revise unnatural sentences. 🌿
Answer
한다 — 수정하다 is a formal correction verb.
I. 독자는 일관성을 기대＿＿＿＿.
[dok-ja-neun il-gwan-seong-eul gi-dae＿＿＿＿]
The reader expects consistency. 👀
Answer
한다 — 기대하다 = to expect; 기대한다.
J. 문체 오류는 글의 신뢰도를 낮＿＿＿＿.
[mun-che o-ryu-neun geu-re sin-roe-do-reul nat＿＿＿＿]
Style errors lower the credibility of the writing. 📉
Answer
춘다 — 낮추다 = to lower; 낮춘다.
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Vocabulary Box
  • 근거 → evidence
  • 부족하다 → to be insufficient
  • 주장 → claim/argument
  • 약하다 → to be weak
  • 제시하다 → to present
  • 뒤 → after/behind
  • 결론 → conclusion
  • 쓰다 → to write
  • 연결하다 → to connect
  • 같은 → same
  • 톤 → tone
  • 유지하다 → to maintain
  • 섞이다 → to be mixed
  • 어색해지다 → to become awkward
  • 통일하다 → to unify
  • 단정적 → assertive/definite
  • 부자연스럽다 → to be unnatural
  • 독자 → reader
  • 기대하다 → to expect
  • 문체 → writing style
  • 신뢰도 → credibility
  • 낮추다 → to lower
Tip 💡 If one paragraph ends in -다, keep that lane unless you have a clear reason to switch.
 

Exercise 3 — Particles, Spacing, and Spelling 🏷️

A. 조사＿＿＿＿ 확인한다.
[jo-sa＿＿＿＿ hwa-gin-han-da]
Check the particles. 🏷️
Answer
를 — 조사를 확인한다: the particles are the object being checked.
B. 문장＿＿＿＿ 자연스럽다.
[mun-jang＿＿＿＿ ja-yeon-seu-reop-da]
The sentence is natural. 🌿
Answer
이 — 문장이 자연스럽다: 이 marks the subject.
C. 표현＿＿＿＿ 수정한다.
[pyo-hyeon＿＿＿＿ su-jeong-han-da]
Revise the expression. 🛠️
Answer
을 — 표현을 수정한다: the expression is the object.
D. 글＿＿＿＿ 근거가 부족하다.
[geul＿＿＿＿ geun-geo-ga bu-jo-ka-da]
In the writing, the evidence is insufficient. 📄
Answer
에서 — 글에서 = in the writing/context of the text.
E. 결론＿＿＿＿ 근거 뒤에 온다.
[gyeol-lon＿＿＿＿ geun-geo dwi-e on-da]
The conclusion comes after the evidence. 🧾
Answer
은 — 결론은 sets the conclusion as the topic.
F. ❌ 확인 한다 → ✅ ＿＿＿＿
[hwa-gin han-da → ＿＿＿＿]
Fix the spacing. 🔎
Answer
확인한다 — 확인하다 is one verb, so write it together.
G. ❌ 수정 한다 → ✅ ＿＿＿＿
[su-jeong han-da → ＿＿＿＿]
Fix the spacing. ✏️
Answer
수정한다 — 수정하다 is one verb.
H. ❌ 검토 한다 → ✅ ＿＿＿＿
[geom-to han-da → ＿＿＿＿]
Fix the spacing. 🧱
Answer
검토한다 — 검토하다 is written together.
I. 맞춤법 오류＿＿＿＿ 수정한다.
[mat-chum-ppeop o-ryu＿＿＿＿ su-jeong-han-da]
Correct the spelling errors. ⚠️
Answer
를 — 오류를 수정한다: the errors are the object.
J. 띄어쓰기＿＿＿＿ 검토한다.
[ttui-eo-sseu-gi＿＿＿＿ geom-to-han-da]
Review the spacing. 🧱
Answer
를 — 띄어쓰기를 검토한다: spacing is the object of review.
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Vocabulary Box
  • 조사 → particle
  • 확인하다 → to check
  • 문장 → sentence
  • 자연스럽다 → to be natural
  • 표현 → expression
  • 수정하다 → to revise/correct
  • 글 → writing/text
  • 근거 → evidence
  • 부족하다 → to be insufficient
  • 결론 → conclusion
  • 뒤 → after/behind
  • 오다 → to come
  • 검토하다 → to review
  • 맞춤법 → spelling/orthography
  • 오류 → error
  • 띄어쓰기 → spacing
  • 은/는 → topic marker
  • 이/가 → subject marker
  • 을/를 → object marker
  • 에서 → in/at; context/location marker
Tip 💡 Tiny particles and tiny spaces are not tiny in advanced writing. They carry the sentence skeleton. 🦴
 

Exercise 4 — Logic, Evidence, and Naturalness 🧠

A. 주장에는 근거가 필요＿＿＿＿.
[ju-jang-e-neun geun-geo-ga pi-ryo＿＿＿＿]
A claim needs evidence. 📌
Answer
하다 — 필요하다 = to be necessary; plain written style.
B. 근거 없이 결론을 쓰면 논리가 약＿＿＿＿.
[geun-geo eop-si gyeol-lo-neul sseu-myeon nol-li-ga ya＿＿＿＿]
If you write a conclusion without evidence, the logic is weak. 🧠
Answer
하다 — 논리가 약하다 = the logic is weak.
C. 예시를 제시하면 주장이 분명해＿＿＿＿.
[ye-si-reul je-si-ha-myeon ju-jang-i bun-myeong-hae＿＿＿＿]
If you present an example, the claim becomes clear. 💡
Answer
진다 — 분명해지다 = to become clear.
D. 어색한 표현은 독자의 이해를 방해＿＿＿＿.
[eo-sae-kan pyo-hyeo-neun dok-ja-e i-hae-reul bang-hae＿＿＿＿]
Awkward expressions interfere with the reader’s understanding. 🚧
Answer
한다 — 방해하다 = to interfere with/obstruct.
E. 부자연스러운 번역투를 피＿＿＿＿.
[bu-ja-yeon-seu-reo-un beon-yeok-tu-reul pi＿＿＿＿]
Avoid unnatural translation-like style. 🌿
Answer
한다 — 피하다 = to avoid; this is a key naturalness check.
F. 예시는 근거를 보강＿＿＿＿.
[ye-si-neun geun-geo-reul bo-gang＿＿＿＿]
Examples reinforce evidence. 🧱
Answer
한다 — 보강하다 = to reinforce.
G. 결론은 앞의 내용을 정리＿＿＿＿.
[gyeol-lo-neun a-pe nae-yong-eul jeong-ni＿＿＿＿]
The conclusion organizes/summarizes the previous content. 🧾
Answer
한다 — 정리하다 = to organize/summarize.
H. 논리의 흐름을 검토＿＿＿＿.
[nol-li-e heu-reu-meul geom-to＿＿＿＿]
Review the flow of logic. 🌊
Answer
한다 — 검토하다 = to review.
I. 주장만 반복하면 설득력이 낮아＿＿＿＿.
[ju-jang-man ban-bo-ka-myeon seol-deuk-ryeo-gi na-ja＿＿＿＿]
If you only repeat the claim, persuasiveness decreases. 📉
Answer
진다 — 낮아지다 = to decrease/become lower.
J. 표현을 고치면 문장이 자연스러워＿＿＿＿.
[pyo-hyeo-neul go-chi-myeon mun-jang-i ja-yeon-seu-reo-wo＿＿＿＿]
If you fix the expression, the sentence becomes natural. 🔧
Answer
진다 — 자연스러워지다 = to become natural.
📚
Vocabulary Box
  • 주장 → claim/argument
  • 근거 → evidence
  • 필요하다 → to be necessary
  • 없이 → without
  • 결론 → conclusion
  • 논리 → logic
  • 약하다 → to be weak
  • 예시 → example
  • 제시하다 → to present
  • 분명해지다 → to become clear
  • 어색하다 → to be awkward
  • 독자 → reader
  • 이해 → understanding
  • 방해하다 → to interfere with/obstruct
  • 부자연스럽다 → to be unnatural
  • 번역투 → translation-like style
  • 피하다 → to avoid
  • 보강하다 → to reinforce
  • 정리하다 → to organize/summarize
  • 흐름 → flow
  • 반복하다 → to repeat
  • 설득력 → persuasiveness
  • 고치다 → to fix
Tip 💡 Advanced writing sounds strong when the claim, evidence, and conclusion stand in the right order.
 

Exercise 5 — Mixed Mastery + Pitfall Patrol 🛡️

A. ❌ 이 글은 중요해요. → ✅ 이 글은 ＿＿＿＿.
[i geu-reun jung-yo-hae-yo → i geu-reun ＿＿＿＿]
Fix the spoken-style ending. 📝
Answer
중요하다 — Use plain written style for neutral advanced writing.
B. ❌ 근거가 부족해요, 그래서 주장이 약하다. → ✅ 근거가 부족하므로 주장이 약하다.
[geun-geo-ga bu-jo-kae-yo, geu-rae-seo ju-jang-i ya-ka-da → geun-geo-ga bu-jo-ka-meu-ro ju-jang-i ya-ka-da]
What was fixed? 🧠
Answer
Style consistency — The corrected sentence removes spoken 부족해요 and uses a written connector 부족하므로.
C. ❌ 조사를 확인 한다. → ✅ 조사를 ＿＿＿＿.
[jo-sa-reul hwa-gin han-da → jo-sa-reul ＿＿＿＿]
Fix the spacing. 🏷️
Answer
확인한다 — 확인하다 is one verb, so it is written together.
D. ❌ 수정 한다 → ✅ ＿＿＿＿
[su-jeong han-da → ＿＿＿＿]
Fix the spacing. 🛠️
Answer
수정한다 — 수정하다 is one verb.
E. 문어체와 구어체를 섞지 ＿＿＿＿.
[mu-neo-che-wa gu-eo-che-reul sseok-ji ＿＿＿＿]
Do not mix written and spoken styles. 💬
Answer
않는다 — 섞지 않는다 = do not mix; this is a clean written negative.
F. 주장에는 근거가 ＿＿＿＿.
[ju-jang-e-neun geun-geo-ga ＿＿＿＿]
A claim needs evidence. 📌
Answer
필요하다 — Evidence supports the claim; without it, the logic weakens.
G. 어색한 표현을 ＿＿＿＿.
[eo-sae-kan pyo-hyeo-neul ＿＿＿＿]
Revise the awkward expression. 🧦
Answer
수정한다 — 수정하다 is formal and fits writing correction.
H. 띄어쓰기와 맞춤법을 ＿＿＿＿.
[ttui-eo-sseu-gi-wa mat-chum-ppeo-beul ＿＿＿＿]
Review spacing and spelling. ✏️
Answer
검토한다 — 검토하다 = to review.
I. ❌ 근거 없이 결론을 쓴다. → ✅ 근거를 제시한 뒤 결론을 쓴다.
[geun-geo eop-si gyeol-lo-neul sseun-da → geun-geo-reul je-si-han dwi gyeol-lo-neul sseun-da]
What was fixed? 🧾
Answer
Logic order — Evidence should appear before the conclusion in advanced writing.
J. 오류 수정은 일관성을 높＿＿＿＿.
[o-ryu su-jeong-eun il-gwan-seong-eul nop＿＿＿＿]
Error correction raises consistency. 📈
Answer
인다 — 높이다 = to raise; 높인다 fits written style.
📚
Vocabulary Box
  • 글 → writing/text
  • 중요하다 → to be important
  • 근거 → evidence
  • 부족하다 → to be insufficient
  • 주장 → claim/argument
  • 약하다 → to be weak
  • 조사 → particle
  • 확인하다 → to check
  • 수정하다 → to revise/correct
  • 문어체 → written style
  • 구어체 → spoken style
  • 섞다 → to mix
  • 필요하다 → to be necessary
  • 어색하다 → to be awkward
  • 표현 → expression
  • 띄어쓰기 → spacing
  • 맞춤법 → spelling/orthography
  • 검토하다 → to review
  • 없이 → without
  • 결론 → conclusion
  • 제시하다 → to present
  • 뒤 → after/behind
  • 오류 수정 → error correction
  • 일관성 → consistency
  • 높이다 → to raise/increase
Tip 💡 Pitfall patrol: spoken tone, mixed endings, spacing slips, weak evidence, and awkward translation-style phrasing are the big five to catch.
 
🎉 You completed the advanced-writing error patrol. Your sentences now have steadier endings, cleaner spacing, sharper evidence, and fewer sneaky spoken-style gremlins. Tiny editor hat unlocked. 🎩